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Gossip

Death in midnight tolling,
An angry tide is rolling

The blood is spilled upon the ground,
Tears are falling all around

I have hatred in my heart,
It was betrayal from the start,

His soul will burn forever,
Will I send him? Never

All I want is to be free,
From his binding grip on me,

But freedom only awaits in the truth,
The end result uncouth.

Gossip is pain,
That twisted boy is my eternal bain.
This was written when I was being blackmailed. It's okay now, but, as you can tell, things got preaty bleak for me.
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AppleOfDiscord-xo Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
"His soul will burn forever,
Will I send him? Never"

Those two lines seem to stand out to me.

I like it!
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KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010
Thank you very much. The person I wrote this about really doesn't deserve this level of fame. He is kind of a... Well, for lack of a better word, a flaming queen in the closet who I wish really would be flaming... Mmm... Fire.
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AppleOfDiscord-xo Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010
Ahaha, I see.
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KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010
Hehe.
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spectraldistortion Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009   Writer
wow! hate and anger reek in every line of the poem! well written... and here's hoping dat the whole thing was settled and u r no more in pain...
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spectraldistortion Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009   Writer
err! sorry, posted it twice by mistake, my bad! sorry again...
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spectraldistortion Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009   Writer
wow! hate and anger reek in every line of the poem! well written... and here's hoping dat the whole thing was settled and u r no more in pain...
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KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
Thanks, and it was.
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spectraldistortion Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009   Writer
ah! good to know! take care...
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KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
You as well.
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KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2009
Stay away from me. I don't enjoy harassment.
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heroineofhyrule Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2008
....is this about patrick?
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KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2008
....................HOW %^&$ING LONG DID IT TAKE YOU TO FIGURE THAT OUT. I write my best stuff when I'm feeling a powerful emotion. This one was written by frustration and anger. Most of the stuff I write (don't post on here) is fueled by crack. Sweet, sweet crack
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Dragon-Princess-Sam Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2009
*wags finger at you* now, now, K-chan, you KNOW that drugs are bad for you.
*notorious (misspelled, I know) for being a mother hen*
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KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009
watever
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Haleyon Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2008  Student Digital Artist
Well, not really into poems myself, but I like the dark feel in this piece. Lots of bottled up emotions in there.

Do you want to kill him? This one is rather vicious...

Gossips are pretty quick to dissipate. Ignore them.
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KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008
Acctually this one was over my fetish. He found out and threatened to tell. And killing him is drastic. Personally, beating the memories out of his head would have been better.
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Lfive Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
... wow. thats an emo poem.
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KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008
Shut up.
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Lfive Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
no.
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KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2008
...fine.
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Lfive Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
BAN KAI!!!!!!!!!!!! PARTY AT MYPLACE FRI 5-10 COME ITLL B BONFIRE/WII PARTY WITH SMORES AND LAZORS!!!
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KeybladeRoxas Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008
When the HELL is the party?!
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